Reviews for Disappear
NorthernShadowedSky chapter 1 . 11/13/2010
I really like the line "If I had looked at you before you crossed the door". That was phrased really well.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
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This piece was kind of confusing. I think you leave too much up to the reader to figure out when you use ... instead of telling the reader what you're talking about. I like the first five stanzas, but then when you switch to "you don't know" I just got really lost and confused.

I did really like "I never realized you were a victim/

of your own thoughts and monsters,"... that was a really great description. I liked the way you phrased this.
Lilja Ruusu chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
"I never realized you were a victim

of your own thoughts and monsters,"

I think alot of people feel like this sometimes, it made me think of suicide, like being trapped in your own head and you can't get out...
Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
. I’m afraid everybody sometimes wants to disappear
Franziska chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
I’m afraid everybody sometimes wants to disappear