Reviews for Of Love & Lyrics |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I actually have very little sympathy for Kimi and Satoshi. There's a saying "C'est dans le besoin qu'on reconnait ses vrais amis" meaning it's in times of need that you know who your real friends are and the point of the matter is: they weren't there when she needed them. And that's unforgiveable. Also, Kazuya interfering isn't something I think is good either. He needs to recognise that it's her life and he has no business messing with it. Lovin' the story so far Maru |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVED IT! It was so romantic and funny, two of the things I like in a story. Keep up the good work and I hope you are acknowledged as a Novelist :) |
![]() ![]() It was a lovely story and just wanted to let you |
![]() ![]() Wow. This story was extremely good. After being on FP for a while it gets harder and harder to find stories that stand out and grab your attention. But omehow you managed it just from your title and summery let alone the actual story which never had a boring momment and never seemed like it was dragging on. To me this story flower well the chapters ended in the perfect place and you managed to really bring the characters alive with their own unique personalities and little quirks, which for any author is a great you for putting up this story. BYExBYE |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story, the romance is believable, the characters are lovable and I never once felt that this was an amature story but rather one that I could expect to top the bestsellers list and which I would have happily bought. I've read this about three times now and still I can't help coming back to read it again. Well done and i can't wait to read more of your work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely loved this story! Of Love & Lyrics was really unique, and it never had a dull moment. I adored the characters. Lucia was very likeable, and a great idea for a protagonist, and Kenji was just adorable. In stories where there are numerous main characters it's sometimes easy to get them confused, but I thought all of the members of Lucy's Wish really stood out because of their vibrant personalities. I liked how they each had a defining trait, or history. Praises being said, the whole Japan thing threw me off just a bit. I thought the idea was great, and enjoyed it greatly but it leaves me with a few questions. The author used the abreviation "v.v." a few times. What does it mean? Is it Japanese slang? Also, I understand the concept of calling someone by their surname when you don't know them well, but it because a little confusing. I was wondering who was talking, was it a band member, or a new character? And if it was a band member, which one? I got used to it eventually, but in the beginning I found it very complicated. Then, when Kazuya/Kenji went to Lucia's "country" (The author never once actually named Lucia's home country though because of the Carnegie Hall reference I realzied it was America) to help with her dad, I sort of wondered, was he speaking Japanese or English? And when Aidan was living with the band, were they speaking English or Japanese areound him? I understood Lucia spoke both, but what about everyone else? All in all, I thought the confusion detracted from the story very little actually. I still found it very entertaining, and full of many wonderful plot twists (Leonora, Lucy's dad's heart attack) and it was funny and entertaining. I felt that the chemistry between Kazuya/Kenji and Lucia was very realistic, and felt myself "aww-ing" through much of the story. I really liked in the end, the loose strings were tied up pretty well-Aiko and Aidan, Lucia's Dad, Kazuya/Kenji's song for Lucia, and the bands second album. Of Love & Lyrics really was a very cute story, I enjoyed it greatly. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() THAT WAS ADORABLE! Seriously, that was amazing and wonderful and...AMAZING! Sorry, mind went blank. It teds to do that at times. :-/ Well, anyway, that was great. Personally, I prefer Korean singers, have no idea why considering that I'm Vietnamese, but yeah. :) American singers are pretty good too, considering that I can actually understand them, but you know, whatever. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was really cute, I like it. In a very fairy tale like story. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, okay, okay! So, one is bisexual and one is gay. . . I think. Excellent writing and quite a way to keep us on our toes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really like this story :] Kouhei is so cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this story. Lucia and Kenji weren't too stubborn, so it was really enjoyable! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story is so goddamn good I nearly peed my pants! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. I absolutely love your style of writing. I love the humor in your story and it seriously cracks me up. It keeps me going and wanting to read more. It's not like the story where it's a good story overall but somewhat questionable if you look at it in pieces. Every paragraph you've written is powerful. The ending's awesome; it's not one of those stories where you aren't easily satisfied and are left wondering what's going to happen or start making up your own ending. After reading it, I felt extremely content albeit somewhat wistful. You really are an amazing author, please write more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great interpretation of Sex Back, I have never thought of it in that sense! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely adore/love your writing style. It just makes me want to read more. |