Reviews for A Name |
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![]() ![]() ![]() oh! please continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow...they are definetely emotionally driven people...*cough cough* Can't wait to see what happens next...great chapter... ~bbyluv |
![]() ![]() ![]() i have a feeling that adien is going to meet her mom and little brother family reunion...but why did her mom leave her how come she couldn't take adien with her when she got a new master... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is good. I'm curious to see who is waiting for her at the castle. |
![]() ![]() ![]() GOOD STORY... IS THERE MORE? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting... Can't wait to read more... |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's a story well done |
![]() ![]() Hot. Very, very hot. And much more fluffed. Could still use a tad, of a bit that was broken off of a morsel which could be found on a crumb in a molecule of katie's hair. But only a bit. Otherwise. Hot. Like damn. I love you |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! That was a fantastical chapter...the details were great! I'm still aching to know who sent for Aiden...and if she will ever find her mother and brother again... Can't wait to read more! ~bbyluv |
![]() ![]() So, first. I'm a jerk. A super jerk. Now that that's out of the way I though it was amazing, not that 'I'm your boyfriend so I have to' amazing, it was awesome, pure and simple. First I thought the way you conveyed what the character felt and thought was very clear and life-like. I also like how even without the super-sex in this chapter it was still very drawing and not at all lacking. And the bathing part, was adorable in the way Alistair treated her, and sad in the way her life was described. And that's a good thing, as your ultimate goal as an author is to make everyone who reads this feel something, including some slight discomfort in the pants area All in all, it was an amazing chapter. I love you, babe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was crazy intense, but absolutely and wonderfully fantastic! This story is superb, I can't wait to read more! ~bbyluv |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, are you sure there really nuns, great chapter, this story is interesting so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() please keep writing! I cant wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Does Aiden really mean little fire? I thought it was just fire in Gaelic, not that I know Gaelic or anything... interesting... Adara might be a good name too because it means virgin in Arabic, beauty in Greek, and fire in Hebrew. It pretty much encompasses everything that she is... just a suggestion... This was a fantastic chapter! I can't wait to read more! ~bbyluv P.S. In this chapter I got the sense that it might actually be her father sending for her, I don't know why but I did... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story so far! Can't wait for you to update! ~Raven |