Touchy, very touchy.. almost had me in tears but has also given me an awesome new idea for a one-shot! THANK YOU! I will make sure to read some of your other entries on .

This is really poetic.

I like the rhythm, like it's very flowing and it feels like it should be read outloud.

Well, this is a review, so you'll have to love me forever. LoL!

I liked your story very much. It's touching, really. I'll be very happy to recommend it on my forum and add it to my C2.

Keep on writing!

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