Reviews for In the Eyes of a Really Bad Stalker |
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![]() ![]() ![]() dis is so much fun reading ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, my gosh. This is, like, the best one-shot I have read in a very long time! |
![]() ![]() cooliio! |
![]() ![]() ![]() reminds me of "The Wonders of a Guy's Boxers" BUT YEAH HAHAHAH damn this is so funny xP and cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is really funny. if it wasnt meant to be funny...well too bad. JU P.S does that sound like jew? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha, very cute and funny. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was really cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A few things: firstly, “Shut it miser.” (typo?) Also, her little, "I, (full name here)," is not necessary. Personally I find it a little annoying when full names are randomly inserted in oneshots. I like anonymity. Just the first name is fine. Also, I felt this was a little choppy (the writing), and I wish this could've been more story-ish and flowed better instead of thought after thought after thought (of Sonya's). But this was cute, albeit a little creepy, and I'm glad xoxluurve added this to our c2. (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() ohh that is so cute. stalking a guy but then finding out he's stalking you too adorable in a really creepy way loved it izzie |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the eyebrow thing! I always irritate my friends with it because they can't do it and I can...na-na-na-boo-boo! Oh, one thing: "So that peaked my interest." It's piqued, not peaked - a lot of people make that same mistake. Good job once again! - Rebekah |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Cool. _ |
![]() ![]() it's funny. i think it would be good if you made it into a full story |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahaha. nice story. very entertaining :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cliche, but fairly well written. Decent spelling, but work on your use of punctuation. ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is very interesting. It has some potential and holds some humor. Seriously embarrassing humor. You know how people feel when they see a sexy guy and want to stalk him. This explains everything. Keep updating. |