Reviews for Trapped
LostInMe chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
Brilliant! I read it aloud, and something made my voice speed up. Perfect rhythm for the rush of adrenaline, speedily pumping blood.
Isca chapter 1 . 4/3/2009
"Trapped like a pawn in a game of chess." Nice simile!

"Their eyes reflect insanity." CREEPY! CHILLING! WOAH! :)

I liked the ending. People like to build up your trust before they hurt you. :(