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davidseven chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
Very nice. I especially liked the spacing of the first two lines, and the cut between them. It's the sort of thing I often try with ambigious lines. "I didn't think...You were there?"

It has a pleasing rhythm, and I like the end. Although I do think the last line "...It'll be the answer" might not be necessary. (For ME it would have worked as well without it, and would close the piece with a punch. But that's just ME)
Lilja Ruusu chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
"I just burts into tears,

a silent crying,

nobody heard..."


"A stranger from your forgotten dreams"

were my favorite parts. You write cool poetry D
Masochistic.Vampiree chapter 1 . 4/3/2009
I love how you ended this. Another good job :)