|Reviews for Who?|
| davidseven chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
Very nice. I especially liked the spacing of the first two lines, and the cut between them. It's the sort of thing I often try with ambigious lines. "I didn't think...You were there?"
It has a pleasing rhythm, and I like the end. Although I do think the last line "...It'll be the answer" might not be necessary. (For ME it would have worked as well without it, and would close the piece with a punch. But that's just ME)
| Lilja Ruusu chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
"I just burts into tears,
a silent crying,
"A stranger from your forgotten dreams"
were my favorite parts. You write cool poetry D
| Masochistic.Vampiree chapter 1 . 4/3/2009
I love how you ended this. Another good job :)