Reviews for Hey, Babe
bubublacz chapter 5 . 8/10/2014
Still hate that jerkface Bishop
APassionForReadingAndWriting chapter 1 . 11/28/2013
I love the story :) Great job!
Nicole chapter 1 . 9/20/2013
God, I don't think it's possible to love a story as much as I love this
heal me forever chapter 5 . 8/25/2012
dis is one hell of stry ...! dude i just love it bravo..great job muahzz i LOVEEEEEEEEE it 333
Lazy-Teenager Syndrome chapter 5 . 7/14/2012
Very cute story(:
leavemeialone chapter 5 . 4/12/2012
AH . . . I love the name Bishop. He is stupid though! He really shouldn't have put her through that. I am also glad that she liked Bishop to not cheat on him. I think it is nice seeing how he changed her to a softer person. I really enjoyed this story. I am glad to see a happy ending!
NeonTime chapter 4 . 1/19/2012
You get two reviews because I totally skipped the last couple paragraphs where you spell out what her eyes darkening mean. Mea culpa. Still I preferred my guess (or the guesses of anybody else) to being told what it was.

Once again, I quite liked the story :).
NeonTime chapter 5 . 1/19/2012
I would have preferred the ending where she goes off to college and meets a mature person that respects her I think. That said it was an enjoyable light read, with the bit where her eyes darkening equalling arousal both cute and set up nicely at the beginning.
Pseudonym59 chapter 5 . 8/19/2011
I really liked Lexie's character. She was believable and not too cliche. :)

Great story!
Pseudonym59 chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
I really like the exposition of this plot. :) It's setting the stage for something really interesting. :)
youngin-matomon chapter 5 . 8/17/2011
I LOVE. Wow this was a really good story. I love well-written cliches so :)
Single White Rose chapter 5 . 7/25/2011
This was really cute! I would've liked to see Bishop squirm a little more, though. :P
mizgardenia21 chapter 5 . 5/25/2011
YAY for happy endings. This story was pretty cool. I like that Lexie is a girl who can definitely hold her own. She's pretty rad. Bishop was pretty wacky -oh the joys of insecurity. All in all a lovely read.
balloonfista chapter 5 . 5/7/2011
Lovely story! It was so different in that she did end up with the same person :)

The EYES chapter 5 . 5/7/2011
I like this story. It's good good format and the characters are somewhat believable. However it's High school and you kept mentioning her eye color. It's just in the first chapter when you were talking about her eyes I was wondering how it would play out through the story. How often does the whole school know the eye color of one student or two for that matter? Maybe instead of using her eye color as an expression of how upset she is you could use her facial features. Or body movements like crossing her arms- something like that.

Loved your story all the same though!
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