"ache you too much to say it"? Like the name is hard to pronounce? lol. Glad he responded to Tommy. :}

Aw... Oh, and I'm surprised Tommy didn't misspell "awesome"! :P

I have to admit...I laughed at "dooty". I'm sorry. XD Hehe, he trusts the president to tell him where he lives... I really like the heart you put into this kid.

Jimmy is always getting into trouble... dang, I already care about what happens to Tommy! XD I hope this Ukraine kid talks to him, I would be too disheartened to read this if he has to write a depressing letter back to him once Sergei doesn't respond! D:

That was oddly depressing, you really got a good hand on this kid' POV! I especially love the misspellings, hehe.

lol! This was hilarious... how inappropriate to mention cooties! :P Haha... still laughing... "leap frog". XD

AW! Tommy is so sweet... This feels very realistic, and I liked the way you wrote it. Great job, it has feeling (if you know what I mean..) and it's a good letter.

LOL! Who is this Tommy?

I'm assuming those spelling errors are intentional, and I like them. Lol, it helped give the feel that I was reading a letter. The letter really sounded like a dumb 5th grader did it, and I applaud you. XD This one's hilarious.

Wow this past few chapters were pure magic! There well written and mix humour and real life seamlessly! Wonderful!

This is innocently funny and depressing at the same time. Still good though!

this was sad. but good still. as a matter of intrwesr is this just made up moments oris itr like something that happened to you?

Hahahahah until the end i thought the magazines were like how to play whit youre kids magazine till the end:P Very funny:D

First things first: oh my gosh, this is so funny!

I love the way you give the child such a naive voice, and the last chapter's intentionally awkward translation is brilliant. You have real talent for humor :)

I was a little confused at first by the spelling errors-sometimes you go almost a whole chapter with very few, and then all of a sudden there's a bit with nearly every word wrong. And often Tommy's voice vacillates between what you would expect of a kid in first grade rather than fifth.

But of course that's part of what makes this so funny. So all I can really say is that this is ridiculously fun to read!

ROFLMAO!

**Wipes Tears from laughing**

Oh my goodness. This was too funny. I could see this little boy being so serious and at the same time I'm like 'kid you have no idea what the rest of the 'cooties' can do to a person.'

The facts that are sugar coated are masterfully written, IMO, and you did a heck of a job of keeping the tone on par with the mentality of a child and his understanding.

Leap frog - I'm still laughing about that...

Nathan - That whole part made me start to cry before I bellowed another round of laughter.

Clothes a natural cootie repelent - Priceless!

Okay now I have to read some more and this is definitely hitting the fav list.

Momo author of My Queen - Pay it forward the Roadhouse

All I can say to that is "Awe."

-Queen of the Shadylands