I really love this story! I usually get bored halfway through stories but this one kept me interested the whole way through! I loved it. Thanks for writing such a great story.

interesting story!

just read this story... very good! suprised you havent got more reviws you should have indeed! :) well done x

This is a very good story. Kept me interested from beginning to end. I liked Ryan. Too bad things turned out like they did. I must say that Carson really annoyed me at some parts, especially the wishy-washy back-and-forth attitude she had with her parents. But I've never been through a divorce, so i don't know how children of divorced parents really feel towards their parents. Anyway, I plan to read the follow up to this story and also Derek's version. Truthfully, I liked Derek more when he was a player ;-)

great job!

Wow :] I'm really likin' your story so far... Good story line (judging from the first 2 chapters ;] ) and I can really relate to your main character (completely blanked on the name, I'm such a space case...) and how she feels reluctant to believe Derek. Another useless fact about me, I totally have had the same thing happen to me before, with the whole message from hot guy who you secretly dream about, and you stay online just to wait for his reply back?

Anyways, I'll be going back to reading your story :]

I just read this whole story, and I gotta say I loved it! It was wonderful! I love Carson and Derek together. Aww. (:

OMG I absolutely love this story! I couldn't believe it only had one review...

I'm reviewing now so that I dont forget when I'm done...good work!

i'm really surprised this hasn't been reviewed.

i dig the friend/relationship forming between derek and carson. i like ryan's character too. i felt a little bad for him for the outta-nowhere break up, but i've done that to someone too, so i guess i can't feel too bad hahah.

i'd really like to know what happens next! :]