Reviews for Curtains III
dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 8/8/2009
I like the repetition of “I love you” in the quotes. It made the speaker sound so unsure and questioning. I thought it got a tad overdone by the end, though.

I like the contrast between the first and second stanzas. Both were very relatable feelings, and the way you tied them together like that really brought out the two extremes.

Interesting story that unfolded here.

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simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
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I really like the ending, it was totally unexpected. The whole story actually was great. It wasn't cliched and it was related. The only thing is the repetition of I love you got to be a bit much, but I'm not sure there's a way around that. Still I liked it.
Lilja Ruusu chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
"I didn't lie to you and you didn't lie to me."

I liked that line the most. I think you're seriously my favorite poet because there's always something superbly awesome in everything you write!
Isca chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
"Though I said nothing." I love that. Sometimes we think, "Isn't it obvious that I love you?"