|Reviews for Forever|
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 1/8/2010
First off, I liked the Salvador Dali reference via Persistence of Memory. Every time references such as those are mentioned I always image surrealistic landscapes, which often times makes the poems more interesting.
I have to say that this format doesn’t even come close to a pantoum format, so I’m not sure why you have it listed as such. Keep up the good work.
| Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
when i read the summary, i kind of imagined it differently but i liked it. put more feelings into it and imageries. i have a problem with imageries, i need to add more. but here, you need to add imageries, it will definately enrich your poems.