|Reviews for The World|
| FaithMemory chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
woah interesting! funny in some way but true... poets are very artistic and they can glorify everything even the smallest pebble.. woah... a nice thought.
| crazyman12 chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
ah, this was a good one. I especially enjoyed the last line; it's a brilliant way to describe a poet. May I make one small suggestion? perhaps you could use enjambment in less places, so that the stanzas aren't so choppy. but hey, what do i know? it's your poem, so do as you see fit :)
I liked the way this poem sounded so simple, and could still communicate such complex topics to the reader. lovely work. can't wait to read more!
| Isca chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
"It is my job to glorify even the smallest pebble." That's not a bad thing. :P