|Reviews for Heat|
| Serenity Takaishi chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
it was very well written and creative, i love uniqueness in a poem...
but i think it flowed funny.
uneven i guess...
| effervescent-sentiments chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
This was so cute! :D
My favorite line: "Your [kinetic] energy
is contagious;"; it's so clever, and yet not too intricate, which makes it smile-worthy.
Maybe you could change the title to something snappier and more eye-catching? Also, why is "work" bolded?
"You're a jewel [Joule]" could be pronounced as an actual name. And I really giggled. I love that. :)
| Isca chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
"Your kinetic energy." Oh, nice diction and imagery!
| Furfaidz chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
that was wicked! [awesome]