Reviews for Clock
Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
i liked it! it's so true and simple. i can relate to it.

but again, you have a mistake, the second line had 6 sylls instead of 7. my note is to be careful of the syll count, here's a game i found on the internet that helped me when i started writing haiku. counting on your fingers is helpful when counting. anyway, here's the

Hope this helped and hope you review my poems too! :D
Isca chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
The second line is 6 syllables instead of 7. Other than that, I liked the first line the best. :)
Furfaidz chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
i love the haiku! i'm gemini too :P my high sign's libra tho. i added you to my fav authors bic i love your form of writing already (and i like the quotes and dictionary on your profee)