Reviews for flirting with disaster was always my thing
stolen hugs chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
i can really relate to this:

"you didn't look back once

which was probably for the better

(you didn't need to see the devoured ashes i'd become)

and yes, i'm still here

waitingwaitingwaiting;

return if you will—

i'll be the one wishing on starless nights."

fantastic!
tangerine dreamer chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
i like it a lot. some lines really stood out to me like the first two lines and then "i was the gasoline...struck just right." you have such a way with words that can make even the simplest of moments seem monumental. keep it up!
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
"i was the gasoline,

slick and flammable

you were the spark,

struck just right.

(the perfect equation for disaster.)"

I like how you used the parenthesis bold and italics.

Amazing last line. Great job!