Reviews for Melody
Guest chapter 1 . 8/7/2020
aww i really loved this
annayh44 chapter 1 . 10/31/2015
The story was amazing !.I love it...
Destiny chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
. . The amount of likeness in this story to my own real life. Well, the characters, that is. I have a friend named Melody and since we're close, our music teacher addressed me as "Harmony" and sometimes I call myself Jade. People also mistake us for sisters. This is so weird. Haha.

Anways, back to your story. Its so cute! I love your writing and I really wonder what's the 1% those twins are hiding. Overall, a great story!

-signed, Destiny.
Kina Kalamari chapter 1 . 2/26/2012
This was excellent. I've recently discovered that I have a strange affection for love triangles with twins. Which is a little weird, but anyway...

Your writing was great. It was easy to read, and your characters quite great.

Very nice job. ]
Rosedreamer101 chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
not much love development. but still good :)
hcdsjnvchmkgfddgn chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
This is a really good story! What's the other 1%?
The.Violent.Spazz chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
I'm curious. What's the 1%?
mixed signals chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
Sweet :D
DofD chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
reindrops chapter 1 . 3/30/2011
I liked it. At first, I really thought Steven is in love with Harmony, but huzzah, he's not. Yay.
Warrior-Princess06 chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
'Great it.! :)) until next time.! :D
mi-to-chan chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
"What's the other 1%?"

... what does that mean! I know you've been hearing a lot from me today. _ I feel like some creepy stalker, I apologize. Cute story though! Great way to use a cliche and yet still steer away from it. :) Although I thought Steven was gay at first. XD
JustWords chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
SO awesome! love the twins and their friend xD great story and writing, can't wait to read more of it!
Bubbly Girl chapter 1 . 6/21/2010
I liked it! :)

~Bubbly Girl
ILveJcb chapter 1 . 5/13/2010
heyy I love this story! It's so cool!

I love their names, especially Melody.

And LOL at Soprano! Hahaha!

Great job, i love one-shots, so carry on writing them!
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