Reviews for Melody |
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![]() ![]() aww i really loved this |
![]() ![]() ![]() The story was amazing !.I love it... |
![]() ![]() . . The amount of likeness in this story to my own real life. Well, the characters, that is. I have a friend named Melody and since we're close, our music teacher addressed me as "Harmony" and sometimes I call myself Jade. People also mistake us for sisters. This is so weird. Haha. Anways, back to your story. Its so cute! I love your writing and I really wonder what's the 1% those twins are hiding. Overall, a great story! -signed, Destiny. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was excellent. I've recently discovered that I have a strange affection for love triangles with twins. Which is a little weird, but anyway... Your writing was great. It was easy to read, and your characters quite great. Very nice job. ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() not much love development. but still good :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really good story! What's the other 1%? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm curious. What's the 1%? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sweet :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Adorable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked it. At first, I really thought Steven is in love with Harmony, but huzzah, he's not. Yay. |
![]() ![]() ![]() 'Great story..love it.! :)) until next time.! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() "What's the other 1%?" ... what does that mean! I know you've been hearing a lot from me today. _ I feel like some creepy stalker, I apologize. Cute story though! Great way to use a cliche and yet still steer away from it. :) Although I thought Steven was gay at first. XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() SO awesome! love the twins and their friend xD great story and writing, can't wait to read more of it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked it! :) ~Bubbly Girl |
![]() ![]() ![]() heyy I love this story! It's so cool! I love their names, especially Melody. And LOL at Soprano! Hahaha! Great job, i love one-shots, so carry on writing them! |