Reviews for The Last Doorway
WinMyHeart5444 chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
This is really great. It's very original, I've never heard anything like it before. I have a couple of suggestions:

1) Now, I've never been in a coma before, but I don't think that people just wake up and talk. I'd expand a little on her waking up, it's pretty important.

2)The Lincoln Park is great, it gives us a look of the personality of the girls, but be careful how you use it. It sometimes comes off as a little childish.

That's really all I can think of, but this is really great. The descriptions in the beginning are awesome, I could visualize her crashing. And the conversations that everyone of the characters flowed really well. I hope that you got an A!