Reviews for Dangerous and Moving |
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![]() ![]() ![]() cool, i like it how you update fast...keep up the good work :) i like Nicole already...I like Max too...I'm very curious . at first i didn't like it that she was pregnant...now it seems as if she had good reasons to do what she did... |
![]() ![]() ![]() hm...i like Greg...is anything going on b/w greg and nicole? if not, you should consider writing a story about him...he seems very interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() cool beginning... i like the transporter guy based on what i've seen so far... is the story kind of distopian, futuristic? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is his name actually transporter? |
![]() ![]() EXCELLENT BEGINNING . |
![]() ![]() Very interesting beginning. I'm excited to see how this story unfolds. :) |