Reviews for Singular Fascination
diffident chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
I love your refusal to conform to any rhyme scheme. The apparent randomness of your rhymes makes it feel so much more natural, and it adds such pleasure to reading this.

Your command of language is excellent as well. You have a great vocabulary but the usage fits perfectly and I love how it's interspersed with conversational phrases like "I promise" that makes this so much more than a poem; it's also a plea, and it brings the speaker and addressee into such sharper focus.

marie
Isca chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
"My windowpanes are cracking with the brightness." The tone of this line phenomenal! Wow! :D

"Love me like you loved her." Such angst!