Hey just a question.. are you ever gonna put the rest of the story back up? D cuz im hoping u will.. its a great read man!:)

I do confess: although I've visited your user profile a number of times, I've never really read any of your stories. 'Finding Home' was the first one I read.

It was decent, yes, but I found something lacking. It was sort of focused everywhere and tension between Brett and Kenna was...weak? I don't know.

I would also like to have more specifics on Kenna's mother and Brett's parents but then I suppose the focus was not on them but rather, other people.

All in all, it was a reasonably written story, although I'm pretty sure you've written better.

Keep up the good work.

Interesting start.

Karla

A nice different story. Always wanted to write an amnesia story, mine would have been very clichèd so I'm glad I read yours.

Aw... what sweet and marvelous story. the whole time - I just want to know why Kenna and Brett separated. I am so tempted to flip through the chapters and find out. But I hold out and finally read and finish each chapter. it is well worth. I wonder how will I stand it if this story is not yet finished. I'll probably die. But really good work with this fic. Well written and the story line is utterly captivating. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story.

great story. i think the pregnancy part was a bit too exaggerated but apart from that i loved the story. i feel a bad for Lydia though, it would have been nice to include her in the ending.

I love this story! The plotline was engaging - I was practically on the edge of my seat trying to figure out what was in that green bag - and I love your portrayal of the characters, especially the relationship between Brett and Kenna. Wonderful job! :)

Really cute. Love it. Somehow, I'm in love with the plot of amnesia stories. It's just so nice and exciting.

Ri

aw I really loved it. YOu definitely know lots about racing and baseball. surprising. Nicely done. :)

im fairly sure i just spent a few hrs reading this, and its about two in the morning but it was definitely worth it! i love the story! and the couple is cute :)

The pregnancy was corny, but over all the story was ok.

-Read You Later

omg. i knew it was a baby problem! i'm so psychic these days. XD

aw~ so darn cute! :D

Yeah! :)

Ok so I was close lol. I'm glad that it wasnt exactly what I was thinking. I woulda been sorta disappointed in Kenna. Im so happy now lol But I feel bad that they had to go through that. I'm glad that they're working it out. Im a sucker for happy endings, or hopeful endings.