Reviews for Hesitation
seventh.movement chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
well done. you seem to really be inspired.
wo bu ai ni le chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
Wow.. A great magnification of the smallest details of the mind. I liked the way you packed what a perosn would go through in weeks and months into a single moment. Great rhyming and excellent flow, I enjoyed it thoroughly )

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On The Esplanade chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
A nice poem about a universal dilemma.

Simple and bare in your phrases that I think reflect the vulnerable nature of the subject. Nicely done.