That really wasn't bad for a 7th grader's writing!

-AG :)

Hello

I'm a member of group Cô Dạ Sơn, and I think that this story is interesting. I wonder if you would please give us permission to translate it to Vietnamese and release it at our site: codason./ and

Excuse us for intruding

We hope to hear from you soon. Thank you very much.

Wow that was a great story! I enjoyed very much! I know that you aren't going to change anything so I won't tell you what's wrong with it. But awesome story! :)