|Reviews for i dream in color|
| Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 4/10/2009
This is wonderful such a beautiful poem.
"i scream a violent violet melody,
but your blue ears cannot hear.
cheer up love, the skies are a yellow tint,
from all of of this excitement."
I can see all the colors. Loved it!
adding to my favorites
| viennacantabile chapter 1 . 4/10/2009
now this is really lovely. there are so many phrases i like - 'let in the color,' 'violent violet melody,' 'soft pink of a shy blush. / the way your eyes change in the light.'
one tiny thing - you're missing the r in monochromatic. but other than that, this is nicely done.
| Isca chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
"I don't know if I could adjust to a light like yours." BEAUTIFUL! MOVING! HEART-WARMING! :D
| fame chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
i love this
| the-ever-changing-name chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
you are my extreme. LOVE IT great job, thus im adding you to my faves list. keep up the good work!