You know, this is the very first time I have managed to read a story to it's end (or nearly so, in your case). I just feel so drawn to the plot! Just a small note: i think you are making Matthew into some love-sick fool, like trying to protect Priscilla and all that. or had you intend it to be this way?

Wow..ur story is so gd..u are a gd writer..can u pls continue..coz i am sort of impatient...so pls continue..

Okay I'm caught back up in your story *banners* My only comment for you at them moment is that the conflict between Pricilla and echo resolved a little quickly. But other wise good as usual

Very good story. Pricilla reminds me of this girl I dated for awhile. Waiting to see how it all turns out.

Have a nice end of summer,Mike

*blushes* I didn't realize you can't see my email or reply, my bad. Anywho great chapter. And evil cliffhanger! (my reviews will be shorter now because I don't have 70 chapters to catch up on)

*Squirms in her seat* OMFG, you've got me to tied to this story I may never be free. And frankly I don't care. Even after the ending I think I might want to keep reading it. So your what almost half finished? Sorry, but I like how it's very long. It pulls me in the more I read.

On another note I think you should go back and edit the earlier chapters. They are kind of hard to read in that format.

There are so many questions I want to ask, mostly about the memories Pricilla is having. Oh, and her denial of them. She almost seems like a direct confrontation person to me. So when talking to Matthew it just seems like she’d ask him what happened to their child. In a way testing if the memories are true, and ease that never-ending mother instinct. I’m not sure if anybody else agrees with me, it just seems like that. Doesn’t she know that her humans memories where suppressed? We know that the Ultima Surge messes with memory. Hadn’t it occurred to her that maybe it is forcing those memories to the surface? And well isn’t having Matthew near making the whole process go quicker? A few more questions here I think before I move on. Why does Pricilla have this thing for motorcycles? I mean it’s got to be strong enough for her to pass over her demon prejudice so that the deal about working for Sari. Oh and well why isn’t she throwing her weight around in the war. She has a whole section of Hell under her command. But she is only using what 2 vampires, and a werewolf?

As for Matthew, we don’t know much about him. Sure he’s the Master of Angels and he’s totally in love with Pricilla. But other then that we know next to nothing. How did he become an angel if he died when Pricilla did? (I hope I’m not assuming too much) How did he become Chaos touched? Was it all the same incident? Why is he a brainless twit if he is the most powerful in Heaven? And going back a few chapters to that teleportation incident. Doesn’t it take all 7 deadly sins to send an angel to Hell? From what I can see a lot of your angels suffer from pride and wrath.

What’s up with Zell but the way? Is he going to switch sides too? Or maybe start an army himself? Take down Trickster so he can be top dog with the mistress? Has he fallen in love with Pricilla and he wants her for himself?

Ok back to the 7 deadly sins. How come they haven’t come up more often? I mean you are working with demons. Shouldn’t they enjoy those 7 sins more then anything else?

Oh well that’s all I can think of right now. You don’t have to listen to the above ranting, but the below should be listened too.

Update quickly, and I really don’t care if it’s short or long, just update.

i'm too lazy to sign in but you must update soon.. and trust me when i say this.. long chapters are not evil.. in fact they are nice... I would hope you would listen to me a nice little reviewer who spent atlest one hour(probaly more) for the past three days readign your story and it's 2 am now and i've been reading for atleast the past 3 hours.. so go update with a nice long chappie to get me over the semi cliffie since i'm now addicted to your story.. *holds out spork* oh and i am not afraid to use this in a violent, threatening manner *malicious grin*-Luna dah-ling P.s. I love it so far, so keep writing and remember long chappies arn't bad!.. oh and next chappie you'll get a signed in review that is a little better constructed and equally as long.. since next time i don't plan to be reviewing at 2:20 am in the morning. Night :P _

P.P.S. What the heck i'll sign in.. i need to add you to the alert list anyway that way i know EXACTLY when you update lol *sticks toungue out :P* so feel special!

o! love it! pricilla makes me laugh! she was completely stoic though! good for her! hurry and update!

Amazingly well written. I could set here and read this all night unfortunately I have to sleep so I'll have to continue tomorrow. But like I said amazing job

~~Strawberry Pie~~

Bumbumbah! OMG scary! More is awesome when you get the chance.

oh shit! dude i hope zell's not going to go out on spirit-capturing rampage! lol, that would make for a fun chapter though. surprisingly enough i like him, i have for a while, or at least i started to when he realized that pricilla was fighting for something she would give her life for and he wasnt. ok well hurry and update!

hey so she is going to trust him? well that is definately a step up. . . for him i mean. lol, ok well hurry and update!

Yay! More LotV! I really like the ending I wish I could say more now but I'm late as it is. Hope to see more, soon-ish.

i think that this chapter was great but i want to know what happened between matthew and pricilla a long time ago!

i love the story it is so cool and i want to know what will happen so i'll just have to keep reading. i can't stop it is the best story i've read in ages! :)