Reviews for Lordess of the Vampires |
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![]() ![]() OOOOO...Romantic. You can't spell "brunette" can you? Whatever. I continue to read faithfully. |
![]() ![]() ::Screams:: How could you do that! Hey I just read this thing at the bottom of the review submitter that says to critique your novel so will. I think you utilize too many points of views and you might think about using a little less adjectives but other wise this is captivating and well written. ~~TaigaSama :) (Like my professional style critique) |
![]() ![]() And you say you can't write! Jeez child, this is a very detailed chapter (though short *ahem*) and I must say, Matthew is quiet the busy-angel, ne? You might want to re-read over it once more, I found some small mistakes but nothing to serious. Just thought I'd point that out because below the reveiw box is says "it is extremely helpful to use this opportunity to comment on an aspect of the story that can be improved. A well rounded critique is often the most rewarding tool for the writer." Besides the small mistakes, my opinion still stands that you should make the chapters longer than just three pages. Maybe four? Give the readers more to comment on besides just stating "Wow! Great Chapter! Can't wait till the next one comes out!" Buuuutt you do what you wanna do, I can't stop you...or change your mind...I can argue, but besides that, I think my opinion stands next nothing. Lol, well I'm going to be the stero-typical reveiwer now...Great chapter! I can't wait till the next one comes out! Lordess and angel-boy dancing, funny thought! Ja'ne! With Love~Akara |
![]() ![]() ![]() O.o ::mysterious dramatic music:: Ba ba buuuuummmm! They want Matthew to kill Lordess? Ooooooo! But doesn't he ::looks around:: hisses quietly:: love her? ::everyone screams:: Yes! It's the truth! Ne? Usakari? That name seems familiar... Weren't they after the blood tear [him and Lordess] together? What exactly is a 'safeguard'? I'm not sure you've explained that to us yet... [and then he gets to the bottom of the page] WHAT? NANIIII? You're not going to tell us? ::throttles you:: How could you!::sobs:: It wouldn't be so bad if you would update more often...! Owari. Juunko. I really should finish my chapter, but I don't know where to end it... |
![]() ![]() ~_~;; That was most interesting...I still think you should make the chapters longer...but besides that it's pretty good. O.o Can't wait till the next chapter...Lordess dancing? Scary thought...Well I can't really focus on the screen, my head hurts, so I'm going to leave you to your peace. Good job beautiful! _~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was interesting... I want to see more Matthew... O.o She got really angry... but I would too if someone tried to upload something to me... [quite unsuccessfully, too] Owari. Juunko. Write more quicker! |
![]() ![]() God...I'm going to become one of those annoying fan people who write a reveiw for each chapter saying how wonderful it was...Oh well! You have no choice but to deal with it! MWAHA! And I think I only have one thing to say...or maybe two...but knowing me it will probably be more along the lines of nine or ten...but anyways...AWWWWW! How cute! - Poor angel-boy though..I think he needs a big hug...and why is Faith so...*thinks*...So...er...annoying? Am I really like that? Pig-tales...*shudder* Anyways, you should...never mind...Anyways, good as always, still thinking it would be better if the chapters where LONGER...but that is just my voice of thought. Well, as always, i leave you with your thoughts and my love _ Ja'ne! ~Akara |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wai! You have updated much sooner! ::glomps:: Arigatou! I was going to die without an update soon... Mou, I don't want you to trap Matthew in there... Who's going to make pancakes? [and be amazed by it when they turn out golden brown and delicious?] So now she's got this dark look... I still don't understand the weird dream thingy that she keeps mentioning... I have to read the story over again so I can get the gist of what's going on... [maybe the past 5 chapters...] Wow... Matthew got a little sarcastic there... that really does suck... torchured for 50 or more years... What are you talking about, not a cliffhanger? ::throttles her:: That *was* a cliffhanger... Why/How did he fall in love with her to *still* love her? Owari. Juunko. Do you mind if I kill you now, because all these cliffhangers are driving me crazy... |
![]() ![]() Nani? naninani? *takes her pillow and throws it at Lordess* You butt! You save the chick but leave the knight in shinning armour to die? *grabs her four other pillows and throws them* Of course, I already know Matt-...never minnndd! I'll shut-up! But seriously, i feel sorry for the people who are reading this and are like "Omg! matthew is going to die!" lol, well good story as always! but of course you already knew that! and you should really make your chapters longer! enterain me for a while longer then ten minutes or even less...riiigggghhtt now i'm babbling! _ good story! luv ya! ~Akara, the one and the only. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mou... Poor Zell, all twitchy because of the constant image of Lordess' hand melting off... Why does he titter. Toriku-san... It sounds so stupid... He should cackle or chuckle or suddenly burst out into maniacal laughter or something... Tittle just sounds so... stupid... Oi! Are you gonna send the Tenshin no Shujin? [Matthew] I hope so! Wai! ::starts acting strangely feminine and giggly:: He must protect her! ::maniacal chuckling:: Owari. Juunko. ::frustrated cry:: I hate technology! - [My Art Teacher] |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god, how could you just end it there? You finally got Vampie out but now Angel boy is stuck in there T-T You're sooooooooo mean! Lol, just kidding _ I was just wondering, does Trickster have a thing for our lil Vampie? :: stars in her eyes :: I love Trickster-sama! He just has this air around him. He's kinda possessive, don't you think? I like possessive _ Lol. Vampie was dreaming of Angel boy, that is just so cute~! Can't wait til I finally understand about the past life thingy o-O I don't get anything at all...Oh well, I'm depressed anyways, might as well go all the way On the other hand, you must be really happy. You got a new fan! _~ Reading TaigaSama's reviews never fails to make me laugh. They're so funny XD Go TaigaSama! Anyways, write more soon! I'll be waiting for the next chapters _~ Ja ne. ~darkness88 |
![]() ![]() first of all I would just like to say this story kicks ass, and if anyone or anything else decides against that i will send the monkey's after them...this i promise. Well, your story is in my favorites, so update soon. and second...uh...never mind my brain just went on a pooper. |
![]() ![]() (Rapidly) What happens to the blood tear?To Usuakori?Why did Lordess take only one glove?Why did Zell try again? (ARGRILY) I HATE YOU! Not really but I am upset, irritated, annoyed and angry with your ability to cut off the story were people will want to read more. If you dont write more soon I shall set loose the Mrshann special forces against your puny existence. (I can do that being Emperor and all) |
![]() ![]() I never read this chapter. It was great. This is the best novel-in-progress that I've ever read. YOU MUST WRITE MORE OR I WILL GO INSANE FROM YOUR CLIFFHANGERS. . Arigato Akutenshi-sama |
![]() ![]() OF COURSE YOU DO! TaigaSama |