Reviews for You don't need to blame me
Isca chapter 2 . 4/9/2009
"I'm a slut." I don't know why, but there's something so comedic about this line, it's hilarious-so honest!
Alice Sleeps chapter 2 . 4/8/2009
Ah, it does indeed. I like the shift to first person, it makes the raw emotion of this poem much more accessible. The bold words are nice touches as well, though I have to say the conclusion disappoints. "If you love me, leave me" is so cliche a way to end something self-derogatory. However, it's a good piece.
Alice Sleeps chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
This seems like a good start to a piece, but I don't know where it's going. Maybe chapter 2 will enlighten me?