|Reviews for Sacrificial Brevity|
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
Whoa, the end line is super creepy, but sexy at the same time. The phrasing of this is really lyrical and I like that. It's dark and raw and sensuous. Very nice. Keep writing! :)
| lymli chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
I love the verse 2
| kunoichi-socks chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
The imagery you used was great! Well done!