Reviews for The Dreamer's Life
Storyteller's Shadow chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
This is very well done. I enjoyed reading this a lot. It is as if the candle is afraid to burn, afraid to leave the darkness, because that is what it knows. There is only one thing you can fix "Has a Power to break your night?" seems to have too much syllables to go with the rest of the poem. Amazing though. I liked it very much
HalfBloodPrincess chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
Another amazing one! Loved the last line! Positivley marvolous! loved it!

bella
PLEASE DELETE MY ACCOUNT ALSO chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
I relate to this poem so much. It's like the candle is afraid to shine, I love it.

You were always a much better poet than I was :)
Soteria chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
I enjoyed the flow of this poem. It just clicks with the theme and meaning behind the piece. Perfect combination for a rhyming poem of this style.