Reviews for Green
HalfBloodPrincess chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
So lovely. I loved the last four lines especially! Fantazmical! And to top it all off the poem's name is my favourite colour! Wonderful!


PLEASE DELETE MY ACCOUNT ALSO chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
My favorite thing about this poem is that you can say the word "fluff" without making it sound ridiculous in the context of the poem. I love the way it is arranged, I love the nonchalant free-verse, I love everything about this poem.

You're amazing! (and I'm not just saying that)

*Amy Carter*
black.magic89 chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
the rhyme scheme is different in the 2nd stanza as oppossed to the rest of the poem, but other then that this was really enjoyable:)"In dream filled nights of sun filled days / The times of us, they do not fade." These two lines were brilliant! They are just stuck in my head, good job:)
fleur de l'est chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
I love it! This is such an enjoyable poem, making me smile the whole way through; full of love and joy, and hopes for tomorrow )