So lovely. I loved the last four lines especially! Fantazmical! And to top it all off the poem's name is my favourite colour! Wonderful!

lol

bella

My favorite thing about this poem is that you can say the word "fluff" without making it sound ridiculous in the context of the poem. I love the way it is arranged, I love the nonchalant free-verse, I love everything about this poem.

You're amazing! (and I'm not just saying that)

*Amy Carter*

the rhyme scheme is different in the 2nd stanza as oppossed to the rest of the poem, but other then that this was really enjoyable:)"In dream filled nights of sun filled days / The times of us, they do not fade." These two lines were brilliant! They are just stuck in my head, good job:)

I love it! This is such an enjoyable poem, making me smile the whole way through; full of love and joy, and hopes for tomorrow )

~fleur