Reviews for Miles Back To
Unknown Error 4.0 chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
Ahh, nice. A refreshing idea, and one that I've spent many a night awake in bed pondering. The scent of a certain perfume, the feel of a fabric against our hand...teleporting us back to a time when things were better.

The only things that bothered me were the misspellings of "weird", "don't" and "cafeteria". It just made me stumble a bit, but nothing really serious.

Keep writing,

musicstar1 chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
You're a great author, and I can relate to most of your stories, like this one. Great job.
tangledwebweweave chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
The title caught me off guard, and i like the format. how did you get it like that?

the repetitive "how"s are nice and the slight imagery, and memories bring you back. very nice, and reminscing (sp?) is good (sometimes), but the last line struck me. is that supposed to be contrictory or serious?

favorite line(s): it's wierd/how the smallest things/can take you miles away

good job! :)