Reviews for Poems of the Past
Little girl Big world chapter 2 . 5/2/2009
I relate the feeling displayed in both of these poems so well! The ending on both were fantastic! And I like the lines,

"You may ponder

But lets not,

Since its over and done

Short but not so sweet."

Great poem!
wo bu ai ni le chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
Wow some real grumpiness there. Loved it! Simple and a good message conveyed. The ending seems sarcastic but reading into it.. it makes sense. Tragically paradoxical.

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Scarlet Fantasy chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
Such a simple and explicit definition of pain .. amazing ..

I love it when you say - Its not you its me ... Yeah very true...I could relate to your words the pain behind it ... really good