Reviews for Let Go
augmentedDREAMS chapter 1 . 6/28/2015
Haha. Now I feel bad for Dylan, but I was glad to see Kayla stand up for herself finally.

But still, I hope Dylan can break free from his mother and Danielle. He can always divorce her. Find new love. I'd be a shame to see him living it out with Danielle. When he saw his daughter, I had thought that maybe he does grow to love Danielle but after hearing her response, I'd be sad if that happened.
Summer-Chickies chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
Ok I was so hoping that Kayla would take him back this is just so sad
rainbowteardrops chapter 1 . 10/4/2012
Heartbreaking. But excellent. :)
eskimoxisses chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
Dang. Your expression of prose just astounds me. The clarity and point of view of this guy. Woah. And how he threw himself into work, into training, into receiving accolades that didn't matter - it showed the stark contrast that things don't always work out as planned in the end. And sometimes you just have to deal with it. Thanks for posting this up!
lalaboom chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
Aw, I didn't like this. It was angsty.

"you are just a selfish bastard who cared about no one but himself." That's not true at all! I felt sad and disappointed when Kayla said this. Yes he didn't choose her in the end but if he really just cared about himself the whole time then he wouldn't have fallen in love with Kayla, go through all of that with her, gained sympathy from me and Kayla certainly wouldn't have fallen in love with him if he was so careless towards her. And anyway Kayla has gotten over him, so why is she still harbouring resent towards him? I would've thought that she'd have peace since she's over him and has found happiness with another man. I would've thought she'd be civil towards him. Restrained and distant maybe, I didn't expect them to become buddies, but civil anyhow. I felt that this fic in a way represented Dylan as nothing but a "selfish bastard", almost villain-like who deserves his life to turn out this way and that the reader should feel content after reading this, since this is what he deserves. Of course I'm not able to say straight out that no, he doesn't deserve this, but I definitely didn't feel content after reading this. He is miserable.. you can say that he deserves this part since this is the consequence of his decision but left with no hope? That I don't think he deserves at all. He made a horrible mistake, deeply regrets it, and can't do anything to turn it all back around, isn't that more than enough punishment? Sure life's no fairytale, but while there's life, there's hope.
Letters97 chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
aww poor dylan. but then again, he brough it upon himself, didn't he?
Candescence chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
Wow, he didn't learn anything. Asking Kayla to run away with him? He's selfish and inconsiderate and immature. He's stupid. He needs to stop dwelling in self pity and get over himself
twibbit chapter 1 . 4/12/2012
:"( aww that sucks
adoh chapter 1 . 9/3/2011

I have to go calm down now omfg. I'm an angst whore.
mia aurora chapter 1 . 2/4/2011
again..take that Dylan ! :D

i felt sorry for him but he made the same mistake over and over again so he didn't deserve any chances ,

and just accept he need to spend the rest of his life with his 'lovely' wife

Nitya chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
Hey, it's me again :P

This one-shot fits really well with the first fiction. It explains the pont of view of Dylan. Well, he is a bastard but human, too.

The last part (in Paris) is very important I think. It describes the mentallity of the family quite well and how he is stuck, too.

I've seen there is a sequel I'm gonna read it now


PS: If you want to contact me,

PS2: I'm not a english speaker nor fluent so if I've made some mistakes, please forgive me ;)
iiHEARTyuu chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
Aw, this broke my heart. Poor Dylan, I'm he's to blame and all. But poor guy.

I commend Kayla for her strength :) good job.

Aw, their daughter sounds cute.
dramaqueen89 chapter 1 . 10/25/2009

I'm crying. Again.

Even if he was selfish and cowardly and stupid, I still think Dylan should be happy.

It makes me sad to see him so... lifeless :(
Diamandis chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
Damn it lmao, I wanna read 'Almost' but I'm scared that it won't end well like this :\ You write so well, and reading this was heart-breaking.
CatProduttore chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
Again, you wrote that so well! I'm glad he realized that he made a mistake!
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