|Reviews for black coffee|
| blurrylights chapter 1 . 1/15/2010
that was really creepy. but in a good way, because i wanted to keep reading regardless of how gross it was. you did a good job. :)
| viennacantabile chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
wow. definitely not for the faint-hearted, but the effect is so forceful and thudding that it all works really well. (and for no reason at all it reminds me of the office scenes in that movie 'wanted.') you lay out lines and images in a wham-bam-slam of shock factor and irony that not many people could write very well. i'm impressed.