Reviews for a common misconception naive
Andrea Lotte chapter 1 . 5/4/2009
I like both of these a lot(though I think I like "Naive" better.) I really like the metaphor of life being like a door, and the use of paranthesis in "A Common Misconception." Nice work!
viennacantabile chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
again, these are fantastic. i tend to struggle at endings, but you're really good at them. what you did with "naive," especially, is so vividly final. excellent work. :)