|Reviews for The Rose|
| musicstar1 chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
My friend wrote something similar to this! Love both! You're a great author. Good job!
| The-Golden-Hour chapter 1 . 4/10/2009
i love this! D
so pweetyful XDD
| Damien Vlashtov chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
Nice little poem. I have a slight problem with the first line, as red can be the color of anger, blood, etc. Personally, I would just remove that line. Then I would remove the "So's" in the poem, to make it flow a little better. In the last line, I would change "catches my eyes" to "catches my eye", but that may just be a personal preference. Other than that, good job. 'Twas enjoyable.
| AEJ325 chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
Ohh! First review for your first work up on fictionpress!
I loved how you used your words in this poem.
Everything flowed quite nicely!
(Word of advice (sp? lol) don't ask for no bad RVs, ppl will do so anyway! Bahh. Evil people.)
Anyway, I liked it!