Reviews for Messed Up Part 2 New Beginnings
iam.who chapter 8 . 8/26/2012
I appreciate that you didn't bother putting labels on what they are and simply focused on the fact that they fell in love with each other. :) Also they faced up to whatever challenges thrown at them and how you wrote their journey is amazing.

Continue writing.
0.0 NightRiders 0.0 chapter 8 . 4/17/2009


xD I loved the ending for this one 3 It made me go all X3 Like...again 3

One again good luck this weekend and remember:


D Ill be here for you if you need me ]


master of suspence chapter 8 . 4/17/2009
wow i like how u ended it... altough i would love an epilogue to see how they do as parents...
zutAra101 chapter 8 . 4/16/2009
Finally something works out for them. Love the ending chaps.

Can't wait for the next story you belt out.
KLSmith chapter 8 . 4/16/2009
I love this story so much. Also yay for the baby. :) Please tell me there will be more soon.
0.0 NightRiders 0.0 chapter 5 . 4/15/2009
I love it so far ] youremaking me want to learn more.

One thig, you say you like it when i pont hings out, so id like you to know that on some areas the emotions of the characters seem cut off, like you dint know how to explain it properly. However, your skill has improved gratly D and i love it.

Looking forward to the next chapter k ]


zutAra101 chapter 5 . 4/14/2009
Nice, love the chaps.

Please update soon.
KLSmith chapter 5 . 4/13/2009
Wow, I'm so proud of both of them. They're really trying to woek everythin out. Please update soon.
KLSmith chapter 4 . 4/13/2009
I'm so proud of Lauren, but dissappointed in Toni, but understodd why she doing what she's doing.
KLSmith chapter 3 . 4/13/2009
Wow poor Lauren, I feel so bad that she had to go through that.
KLSmith chapter 2 . 4/10/2009
Love teh begining and Lauren's alternative to the drugs. Can't wait for the rest of the story. Please update soon.