Reviews for An Urban Legend |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Majorly creepy, Catherine. I had to go look and make sure Tiny was still in the house. . . Good writing, good suspense - disturbing ending (in a good way :)) -Becca |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice to see a good original story. At first, I was expecting a "Humans can lick, too!" adaption. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this is SCARY. I wasn't expecting for the story that way so it kinda scares me. This is good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked this short story. Not too long and it kept me interested, the ending was great it really united your whole story into one!Once again really enjoyed it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Odd. The writing was okay, and the story, while slightly cliched (granted, it's supposed to be an urban legend, so the cliche is to be expected), is pretty good. That said, you handle some of it far too obviously - describing the dogs gives it away far too quickly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh...MY...GOD! THAt IS TERRIFYING! AND GROS! AWESOME! :) I LOVED IT! GREAT JOB! |
![]() ![]() ![]() :) I enjoyed reading this immensely. I like the irony and I think it is very well written for such a short story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was very good. I didn't really get it till the end. I was wondering why the voice said come here doggy too. You have good details in your writing even though it is short. You can check some of my stories if you wish. They're descriptive but a little long |
![]() ![]() ![]() FEAR IS MISUNDERSTANDING. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the way this was written, and it was very creepy. D: This sort of makes me wonder if they put anything creepy in the sausages next to the Lowes I often go to. xD |