|Reviews for The Cynical Ranting of Hayden Paretski|
| Ugh chapter 3 . 11/25/2016
I hate when the protag really can't stand someone but are actually all talk and end up getting all chummy with them. I had a lot of respect for Hayden at first but now I think he's all bark. I'm disappointed. And I mean, really?! He blurs out his 'secret' like that to the guy for no reason?! I don't buy it.
Also I truly despise Jude. I wish I could punch him in the face.
| Guest chapter 14 . 4/18/2016
| justanotherdot chapter 14 . 1/11/2016
HOLY FUCKING SHIT YOU UPDATED! I AM DYING! I've been following incomplete stories all over the net and had never lost hope about some authors updating even after years because I saw some update gaps here and there but they still finished it and my faith is renewed. I'm not sure when I started reading this but I'm pretty sure it was quite a while ago. I'll have to reread the whole thing to properly appreciate it but I was so ecstatic I had to review after my e-mail alerted me to this update. ThankyouThankyouThankyou. 3 I love you, you wonderful creature you.
May your muse be kind and your circumstances favorable so that we may continue to see more of your work.
| somersaultkick chapter 13 . 1/8/2016
Their situation is pretty complicated, with their dark histories that easly blend into their corresponding characters. But I think I'll go with Mark :D
| Kenau chapter 14 . 1/5/2016
I wasn't particularly keen on signing in for yet another webpage / forum, but after skimming through your adorable "ranting", stretched along so many years, it's simply unavoidable.
Cause, bloody hell, that was quite a bunch of snarky dialogues, glimpses of black humour and beautifully murky teens in the obviously GB environment. And the juicy promise of ASAMG? How can I not be hooked by it and check if you will be able to keep your word?
The protagonist's surname was what piqued my interest at first, but then I simply couldn't avert my eyes of this piece. You somehow managed to brush against my soul with all of it, despite few minor lapses (I mean few typos and weak points, i.e. let's say - the way random people were able to aquire Hayden's phone number), my own reluctance and vastly different field of experience.
Maybe a little too much flapping with the rainbow flag for my taste. However, damn it, I understand why you felt it's so important to underline and can't agree more with your characters' point about this matter.
As a person who suddenly gained a deep insight about development of chaotic processes since first spike of gonadal hormones (and still haven't found a way to adjust to them on the verge of thirties), I highly symphatise with your rather irregular schedule so far and won't hold it against you. And by all means I whole-heartedly cheer on your plans to arrange the work more efficiently in new year.
It may sound weird, but I'm not even slightly sad that you decided to drop this project. It's in larval stage after all and honestly I can't wait to see how will you write matured Paretski - in a year or decade, it doesn't matter, I will gladly wait and train my patience.
Excuse me for too long comment and teasing, I will attempt to behave now and devour rest of your stories in the most humane way I'm capable of.
| Originally Pristine chapter 14 . 1/2/2016
Well. All in good time. I'm patient. I can wait.
| Guest chapter 13 . 11/30/2015
Huhu please continue this
| zerefRomanticgyal chapter 13 . 8/15/2015
well... im lil late here.. i mean a looot late.. maybe three whole effing year late... and maybe its stupid but anyway ill ask... could you please update soon...ok.. this story is prettty cool.. awesome.. ive been hooked... i just happen to come across it a week or two back.. and since im addicted ive read it like ten times.. well eight actually... so please..i know im late but could you please update... i really... really... want to know wat happens next... and i really want to know more about Jasper..or if Hayden gonna get with jude..his bedsfriend lewis or Mark... pleeeeeeaase...
| Guest chapter 13 . 8/15/2015
well... im lil late here.. i mean a looot late.. one whole effing year late... and maybe its stupid but anyway ill ask... ok.. this story is prettty cool.. awesome.. like i said before ive been hooked... i just happen to come across it a week or two back.. and since im addicted ive read it like ten times.. well eight actually... so please..i know im late but could you please update... i really... really... want to know wat happens next... pleeeeeaase...
| Wynnfield chapter 13 . 4/9/2015
Im really supporting Mark now. I supported him ever since I read about his part! I wonder why he suddenly turn serious though. And sometimes I forget about him being the younger of the two
| chocovic-chu chapter 13 . 3/24/2015
I love Hayden with Mark(well, the option is either Lewis or Mark because I still dislike Jude even though his background story almost made me sob).
And I like Hayden's character; he's stronger and independent despite his dark past.
I have this feeling that you had killed off that Jasper character thus his ghost still haunted Hayden . . .
Oh, anyway, was Hayden actually in love with Lewis but he didn't realize it yet so that was why he looked so jealous when Lewis and Jude together? That's my biggest question after reading this far.
Thanks for sharing! I hope you finally have a lovely spare time to update this intriguing story!
Once more: I vote for Mark! He's totally for Hayden!
| Marie Starr chapter 13 . 2/3/2015
Please update this story! I want to know what Lewis's problem is and how Hayden will with the consequences! Looking forward to it!
| thecowonthebox chapter 1 . 11/1/2014
Is this story dead ? I really hope it's not ! Such a great one.
I just re read it and I loved it like the first time.
Please, come baaaack...
| incrediblectopus chapter 13 . 5/29/2014
God, this is just SO GOOD. I know it's been two years since you updated it, but I'm not going to give up hope. Hayden and Mark are just amazing together. I'm not going to be able to stop thinking about them! PLEASE finish this story, because it's fantastic, and is really worth completing.
| ajashire1 chapter 13 . 4/24/2014
Hey um I just started reading this and I really like it... could you please update it... Please.