aw :( i...wow..idk what to say thats sad and i cant believe jasper was such a fucktard :/

oh my god o.o wow lol i hope we find out more of his past! or you know what actually happened with this jasper guy lol

Aww poor hayden everyones lusting after him lol i like this story it really good i dnt usually like angst this story's really good you do have some grammer problems but other than that its really good three thumbs up

I just finished reading your story, which I discovered yesterday and I have to say that it is one of the best things I've ever read! Seriously, I could fill pages with everything I like in this story, but I guess two words can pretty much describe how I feel about it:pure awesomeness. Heyden just rules and the mere thought of him being together with Jude gots me drooling to the point that the keyboard has become sticky! Please update as soon as you can 'cause I'm not only in love, I'm OBSESSED with this story!:D

I just spent at least 2 hours straight reading this,and I loved every bit of it. I also like your writing style. I don't usually review peoples stories, but this one is just beyond awesome. (I tend not to use the word awesome, like I said earlier, I like this one.) I cannot wait till you update this and to see what Mark is up to. Jude, he seems distant, I just have this feeling that he is. Lewis, even though I don't like him, for me he is just one of those people I don't like for no reason. He just annoys me. Now, for Hayden, I like his personality. Reminds me of him, expect i'm not blunt like him. I don't give a rats ass about what anyone says about me, but if someones f**ks with anyone I love or care about, get ready for verbal abuse, if it comes down to phyisical, then so be it.

This is like, the longest review I have ever written. So, to ocnclude this review, I LOVE THIS SSTORY! And, my laptop is being a bitch to me, so I am going to end it here. Hope you read this!

-OrangeJuice190

I think that I love Mark...

Yep.

ALSO! Everytime I go to read this story I have to start back from the beginning because, one either my mind erases every time I read this or you don't update enough.

I'm going to guess the second one because I love this story.

woo, update. and yes, it is sounding crazy, what happened to make that kid that way?

and the end, wondering if he likes-like mark?

his parents sre great by the way.

Omg, I am OBSESSED with this story! It is amazing! I love Mark! I would be SO happy if Hayden and him dated for at least a little while. They would be such a good couple.

It's good that we're seeing more of Mark and of Hayden's past.

I'm just wondering if Jayce is ever going to make an appearance? He would definitely add a bit of spice to Hayden's life.

Anyways, love your story, and can't wait to read the next chapter that hopefully will contain the beautifully horrendous mess you speak of.

Colz story

Something's gonna happen at the party, isn't it? I can't wait for the next chapter. And is Jude gonna come between Lewis and Hayden, I hope not, thought it would provide more drama :)

Wow...

I like Hayden, but everyone around him are just one fudge cake of a cast. I can't believe the amazing job you've done with them. Jude is one complex thriller, and Lewis is... ADORABLE.

Anyways... I'm sure you'll understand if this review's a bit short. I wanted to alert it, and I had to leave at least one review :). But I wanna sleep tonight... lovely schedule with all AP classes.

Keep Writing

Mark! Hayden-Mark interaction! Soon it shall be Hayden/Mark, at least in my plotting mind. Especially because Hayden now knows that Mark is gay! And it's nice to see Jude didn't rape Hayden while on the trip. Always a plus, yes?

It's interesting how Hayden seemed to have used Jasper. I thought it would be the other way around. Still, I want to know just how Hayden got hooked up onto heroin; did it have something to do with Jasper?. And I wonder what "taking the piss" means...It sounds familiar so it might be something said in America too. Or maybe not. Dunno.

Can't wait to see where this story goes. :)

Lovely chapter again and I was really not expecting this from Jude. Nice surprise D I do really wand to know what happened to Hayden XD

I would love to be a beta reader if you do not already have one. )

Like you said "WTF" ? I'm confused now !

And can't wait for the next update nevertheless