Oh my. I really hope he doesn't punch him. It fits that he WOULD, but I hope he doesn't. I haven't had a problem with all the British wording you use so far. xD Might be my British neighbors fault. :P I beta btw. Wee? Looking forward to next chapter.

AHH! I LOVE this story, but HATE cliffhangers! :3 Next chapter, pleasse! XD

great chapter.

saw your request for a beta, and i'd been willing to beta for you if you'd like. XD

OXXOX

~tinker

haha, I'm a girl, thanks. lol. And I absolutly hated that cliffhanger. Like, really hated it. I'm hoping like crazy you'll update soon.

This was worth the wait! I like Jude's little dramatic back-story revelation, as well as the way he said that he watched Hayden. I'm very excited to see what 'little things' he picked up on!

Hm, and I must say that while I got that you were British (and the whole, lighting up a fag thing) from the start, I still didn't pick up that 'football' didn't mean 'American Football' for a while. I kept picturing Hayden wearing a helmet! XD

Oh, and I'm not sure what you're looking for in a Beta, but I'd be willing to do it. I love your writing style and this story, but I did notice some mistakes as I was reading through it. The biggest one being in the sentence "If want you want is a fuck", the first want should have been a 'what'...right? And there was some other little stuff, but I don't want to nitpick in public!

Anyways, just send me a message if you are interested. If not, I completely understand.

OMG! I am SO glad I discovered this story. I LOVE it! Please, please update soon...The wait's gonna kill me! :)

Hi!

I just found this fic and absolutely love it! I think Hayden is really original.

I'm not one to read fics that aren't complete, but I hadn't checked when I started reading this. Will this be continued?

Aww that's a cute chapter ending, hope to read the rest soon I hope we see a bit more of Mark too, he seems really nice and concerned about Hayden.

Anw Really good story, Keep it up

You are so talented. This is proper, proper humour, blunt, funny humour with the impression that its effortless because it isn't cheap...the flashbacks work brilliantly and everything is so well written I honestly cannot wait for more!

MORE! Please update I need this story to live! "Thats all that needs to be said. Lolz"

What a surprisingly refreshing story. I'm fully intrigued by Hayden and how his past continues to influence who his is. His interactions with everyone are fantastic to read about because they're so honest. You have done a great job sharing his life and I have no idea how this will end. I have my hopes, but I like Jude, Lewis and Mark. They're all really different but they all truly like him in spite of the negative aspects of his personality. Nicely written.

Hello!

Ok, this isn't a review coz I've already read this chapter. It's basically harassment :). I'm so sorry to do this coz I get people doing it to me all the time on my fanfiction account and it can get annoying, but will you be updating soon?

Coz seriously, I love this story, and I'm dying to know what's gna happen next between Hayden and Jude. I would have sent this shameful harassment to you in a PM but I can't find the PM thing on your page and I'm not sure if fictionpress even has one.

Anyway, update soon? Please?

w.o.w i wanna know what happens next ! great story!

oh god i'm so in love! lol with this guy. lots f fuck offs and fuck you! which is used in britain so much! lol that some good progress there making

be super!

D'aw. How cute.

Hayden actually has emotions other than anger and well... thats about it.

c: I'm so curious to see who the hell he ends up with. There are to many men in his life.

_ All the drama promised in the next chapter has me psyched! Till then.

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