I love you, I love Hayden, I'm still deciding whether I love Jude or not, and Lewis is just the cutest guy EVER. This is just one of the most humorous, yet coolest, stories. And it is amazing.

I have to say you have great imagination..i really like all the characters, but most of all Hayden...of course,mostly because he has the "balls" to say everything on his i feel cynical to,but I am a wimp(I admit it) and shut up about my hate to the ...of all the guys in Hayden's life,I would really like to see him with this Mark fellow,because he seems genuine and serious about Hayden.I really think he is what Hayden needs.

can has Hayxlew pl0x? ;D

Jude is such a twat and Mark is iffy. .

I can't wait to hear about the whole Jasper-ordeal though. u

Great chapter! Can't wait for the next. :D

so. the idea of Hayden being in love with Lewis (as Mark and Jude seem to think), without actually admitting it to himself or anyone, is kind of interesting.

you definitely make the story interesting. :D it's hard to guess with whom Hayden will end up, and I guess that's your intention? or maybe he won't ent up with anyone?

Hi, new reader! I couldn't really be bothered to log it, so I'll just review the story like this. Love the story! Can't wait til the next chapter! Plz soon!

I like the way you write, with showing how much a prick both jude and Hayden can be trough actions rather by your words really ever read fics where all they can do is talk about how cruel or how smart or witty this person is but it never shows? they annoy me to hell glad we still have some people who can write.. I like speculating things about Haydens past and and really you show trough everything that Hayden has had a troubled past by his character now i like it...ok now for all that things I actually never writeXD Seriously the best i get with comments is WOW love your ficXD so anyways love it:P

No worries. I hate the sun too :P and i live in a sunny place :(

O hello Mark! and aw poor Lewis, can't take the truth :P

yay for the update!

... why do i get the feeling Jude is messing with him to get his attention or something... gah idk I just know that i can't wait for the next chappy!

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yaay

I'll join the Hayden fan club. :D he definitely has character, and actually that's why I kinda like Jude, too. I don't see why everybody finds so annoying. well, maybe he is, but only a little.

they fit together, because neither of them is one of those really sweet and nice guys whith little personality (you know, you see them all over the stories and they are a actually very boring).

so yeah, looking forward to the next chapter. ;)

Do you live in England?

Random question. I'm probably going to just look at your profile to see but I just wanted to ask.

ANYHOW! chickenchicken.

I love this story...

I have to go to sleep because I have to work tomorrow... lame.

MUCH LOVE! PEACE OUT!

Smart move hayden, pour water on yourself when you don't have an extra shirt XD

Loved the chapter. Glad Hayden's in football and not some girly thing. His skepticism is rather refreshing.

Also, want to pry Jude off of Hayden. He seems rather annoying. I'm sure he's just being persistent, but he's really like a tape recorder and that makes him predictable. Though him taking Hayden home after the mugging and catching falling leaves showed his sweet side and depth of personality. Otherwise, I get Hayden's thinking- he really can be irritating. Ggrr. Can't wait for them to move past the Jude flirty lines and Hayden's ignore tactics. dO IT.

Have fun on your holiday, then get back with loads of ideas.

I really like Hayden's cynicism. Jude's slightly annoying. The annoying types like him really iritate me too, but it's all cool cz Hayden's all cool.

So, who's going to save Hayden and why'dd he run his mouth off anyway? Answers, give us answers!

ah! Cliffy!...just when I was getting into it to. Great story. Really enjoying it so far. Can't wait for the next update!