No, no, no! You can't just end it there! I have to know what happens to Hayden (and who came to the rescue?) So please, please update soon :)

Anyway, great story so far. I'm so glad I decided to read this :) I love how Hayden acts, his POV is def. interesting. Plus, I wonder what this whole deal with Jasper is? Like who is Jasper, and why can't know one find out? And my god, he lost his virginity at 12? That's so young :( I bet (and this is only a guess... that's prob. wrong) that Jasper is someone older and that's why he's worried about anyone finding out. Or maybe someone that was close to his family? Or perhaps he was raped? Hmm... I also think that he is gay... he's just closeted (doesn't really realize it or want to be). I mean, why else would he have an erection from seeing Jude and that guy? Which by the way, I loved how he poured beer all over them, and then I loved the scene at the place he works (the stuff he says) It was funny!

Basically, love the story. And please update soon! It's my birthday today... I'd love to see an update :)

-eVil uNicorns-

Cool! Really great start, I'm loving the characters so far

I really like this so far! Update soon!

I adore Hayden :3

Fantastic story!

Wow. I've become captivated by your story! So awesome. :3

Hayden is my fav. character. He seems really stuck on keeping the world away from him. It's endearing. I used to be like that. I only had two friends who were a lot like Hayden's. Except they were both girls and they only liked me because i knew them since kindergarden.

I guess that also explains why I don't really like Jude either. xD

Guys like him just really piss me off. Sometimes I really want to punch them.

Anyway, sorry I don't review ever chapter. It's just if I did then i'd never have anything to say. It'd be really boring.

Can't wait to see what happens next!

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I just now realized this, but Hayden reminds me of myslef, I'm not sure that's good or bad, but I would have said the same thing to that Mike person. Anyways awesome chapter, I hope Angelica got help.

yay. update!

I have nothing in my head that I want to share with you.

So here is a normal review:. I love Hayden...

Wonderful chapter.

OH! I went to go see Transformers 2 today! IT WAS WONDERFUL!

Yay, a new chap! Just had to leave it with a clif hanger, didn't you? Now what will I do?

But yeah, great it was, again, much I like, again, more I want, again... and so on. Just got home from work so I don't have anything intelligent to say. As you might have noticed.

Do people like Jude really exist? I have a habit of developing extremely biased opinions of the characters based on what the main character thinks (Ireallylovehayden) and I'm really starting to want to slap the smirk out of Jude's face. God he's so annoying.

That's not necessary a bad thing, mind you. Invoking emotional reaction is positive, I guess.

And imagine my satisfaction at a time something wipes the smirk off his face...

Oh. I'm rambling. I'll quit. Night.

Love it! Another great story of yours

XD I truly love this story. I read your other one as well and i liked it but this one is fantastic! I love Hayden. He's just the right amount of asshole and loner. Really, I love this story!

I like this! :D

Hayden's hilarious and I like Lewis but I'm not sure what to feel about Jude.

Thanks for writing~

OH

I don't like Jude. :/ He's kind of a dick-weed.

I'm not sure how to feel about Lewis yet.

But I LOVE Hayden w Tiz just. Lol-attitude.

Anywhore~

Mad writing skillz, great job. update soon. -

I WANNA KNOW WHO JASPERR IS D:

I like this so far. I look forward to your next update. :)