I like it so far. Hayden's wonderfully snarky and now there's the mystery of his past I am seriously digging him. keep up the good work.

...the name Jasper seems to be haunting me. not. cool. but...now i want to KNOW about this jasper! XD

ohohoho.

hayden's a slippery little thing. c:

interesting story, dear. i'll be looking forward to hearing more from you!

Aww. That was cute. I forgive you.

But anyway. I did this dinosaur thing with my hand before I started to review and I had to tell someone and you were the closest thing I could get too.

I love Hayden.

I wanna make love to him. (You have to sing that.)

WHO IS JASPER? WHERE ART THOU? WHERE ARE YOU? SHOULD I CALL THE POLICE? oh beautiful Jasper, rose of my life, mudd on my old shoe, where are you? My beloved? Where are you?

I love this story.

I just love Hayden! I hope he doesn't change.

Oh I really hope Hayden's past comes out soon. It sounds pretty interesting from what I can tell. And this chapter was really, really, really hot. And also Jude's reactions was hilarious, bet he wasn't expecting that. ;D

Damn that was a fast update. Love it:)

This chapter is great, it was a good story before but now I'm REALLY interested. There are secrets to undiscover;)

The second chapter was also good, though you came and upteded before I had time to review it. Blame yourself.

Don't really. Just keep updating.

Yeah so. I'm happy. Yippie.

P.S I loved how Hayden spilled his beer over them. Just hilarious.

Uh, oh! Heyden said something he shouldn't have! I wonder how he'll deal with it. Awesome story, I love it!

woow. yay! update! i realized why i like hayden, i think hes everything i used to be. that may sound weird but w/e. this is interesting. what will happen when the "provoking" goes overboard?

I'm seriously loving this so far. The characters are believable, and the narration is unique. Most first-person stories end up rambling, especially when they're narrated by characters who are...er, less-than-pleased with life, but this was a refreshing change from the norm. I adore Hayden, and Jude is growing on me, though he's just a mite irksome. I can't wait 'til next chapter!

Wolf.

I'm loving this story and I can't wait for more of it.

How come I get a line and everyone else gets a freaking book?

I LOVE THIS STORY AND ALL YOU SAY TO ME IS "Haha, lol, thank you :)"

SERIOUSLY?

I'm totally joking.

Hehe, I love his prissy-ness. Totally like me. However, I don’t like (and this is just MY opinion mind) of your reference-that-seems-like-mocking of religion. Like when Hayden guessed that it was ‘Jesus’ whoi had him blinded. I know ‘everyone does it’ but I’ve had enough of it. I’m not extremely religious or anything. I just think it’s rude to poke fun at people’s faith. I’d get equally peeved if Hayden replied with a ‘Buddha’. Just a pet peeve about authors I have. Again, I hope this doesn’t count as flaming or anything. I’m still reading your story, which means I’m liking it, just thought I’d point it out. Again, my own opinion, no one else’s onion. Hehe.

OOhh, the drama. Hayden is so cynical, it makes me laugh. It’s fun having his P.O.V. of the story. And Jude’s just upfront. ‘I’m gay, are you?’ Nice characters, hun (your username too big) so where’s the story? Update? Be charmed by my eyes of doo-oo-oom and puppy dog goodness. MEh, just continue this story, K?

i like it :) i especially like jude. keep going with this.

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psh. it was BETTER than okay; i like it a lot. hayden's such a sweetie xD i mean, you can tell under that hedgehog exterior is a cute, cuddly fuzzy hayden.. lmao.