You're absolutely brilliant. This whole time I had no idea who Hayden was going to end up, and your summary doesn't reveal too much either. It seems like both Mark and Jude are in love with him... every chapter is laced with such a heavy dose of suspense.

I really don't know who to cheer on... Hayden for Lewis? Or perhaps Jude for Hayden? Or Hayden and Mark? Jude is like the dangerous bad boy type; however when he bared his heart to Hayden, it left me utterly confused. There is so much sexual tension between the two of them. But what about Mark and Hayden? Mark seems like the perfect boy, and it seems like Hayden is starting to take a liking to him. But what was the weird change in attitude near the end in this chapter? I hope that wasn't enough to cause a rift.

What about Jasper? There are so many unanswered questions concerning Hayden's past. Did Jasper pass away? Did Hayden really not have any feelings for him?

I hope Lewis is a true friend, and not one of those characters that will sacrifice his friendship over jealousy. You played with human relationships very well, and it was refreshing to see that it was not just a plain love triangle, but one that is complicated. I hope you continue this story; I'm looking forward to reading it till the end.

Please continue this! I wanna read moree :)

I do hope you didn't die because of another year. Do you think you will update this story again, or did you grow away from it? I really hope not.
I do like Hayden and the way you give him personality. Up until this chapter you constantly made him talk and act as not being gay, but his perceptive has always been very pro male. Knows and sees much more details (and appreciating it) concerning boys than girls. You're very natural in writing this character, it's very credible.
And now he is bi. That works too. His appreciation of the female may have its roots in Ellens personality. I suppose Lewis reminds him a lot of Ellen.
Ofcourse he feels guilty about Ellen. That won't go away by rationalising it. He will have to learn to live with that. At this moment he has frozen himself in time and action (is that even proper english?) Only when he forgives himself and accepts the past, he can move on. And I guess that is where you stand. What can put his live back in motion? It can not just be falling in love. That wouldn't be enough.

I really, really hope you will finish this story

This is so brilliant, please continue it soon, before my heart splits itself into several pieces :) I love all the different characters, although I can't figure out their motives towards Hayden and its really frustrating me! But seriously, this is one of the best fictions I have read recently, well written and barely any grammatical or punctuation errors.

Ah, I'm so glad we're finding out about Hayden's past at last. And wow do I love Mark. I also love the inclusion of bisexuality being a REAL THING, some people reckon if it's not straight, it's gay which is super annoying.
Anyway, this is a really brilliant story. It's quite a lot darker and deeper than I expected at first, but I love it :D
Sooo... it's been over a year since you updated... You reckon you'll come back to this story at some point? I really hope so. My imagination can't fill in a suitable ending for me because I simply have no clue where this will end. I've had different suspicions at different points, but I still feel like the story has a long way to go if it is going to finish satisfactorily (is that a word?)
So, pleeeasee! Come back to this story. :) I'm not ashamed to beg a little.

Awwww, I'm in love with Mark. I'm rooting for him now.

Ah, finally, a good story! I wish that I had found it sooner! It's taking me forever to find one that I actually WANT to read, nowadays :(
Anyway, this chapter made me want to cry, like lots of the others. I just felt so sad...poor Ellen and Hayden. I wanna murder the guys who did that to them :'(
And Mark is kinda growing on me. I like him a lot :D But, I still absolutely adore Jude, for some reason. I have no idea why. He's awesome, though :D And Angelica. She's so adorable :) I'm pretty sure that I love all of your characters now, even Sophia, which is weird because I usually only like two or three characters in a story and don't pay attention to the rest :P
You're an amazing author :)
Please update soon!

omygod wow :O this is the best freakin story ive read so far here
you definetly gotta update sooner 3

Absolutely lurrrvvv it plz continue! :D

Please continue, I like reading this story a lot. I like that he is such an interesting character.

huegrnjd oh shit it ended
craap

So much love! For once, its nice to read from another british writer so that i am not trying to translate the different types of football or other british phrases cos they make sense! Yay! I love all the characters and their backgrounds... Please please please update! I will send you biscuits! (or cookies for all you americans reading :P) and cake! :D

will there ever be an update on this or has it ended? It was really good while it lasted.

Please update! I really want to know more about Hayden's past and his current relationships!

Lol. Wish'd you continued! :D
Awesome fic.