YES. From the beginning, when Mark was introduced, I always wanted Hayden to go with him. Oh. This makes me happy. And satisfied.

Jude was an adorable character, and thoughtfully made out. Thank you for creating this.

Oh oh oh I love this story! The characters are all interesting, even if Mark for some reason looks like a manga character in my head, big eyes and all lol. I love the way it's a little dark but funny at the same time, and just well really good...I'd probably put it more eloquently, but I'm tired so I hope that's good enough!

I love your story and Hayden! Please keep up the awesome work!

asdfghjkl Fucking fantastic!

I want to write this long detailed review but im kind of in a hurry so Ill just let you know that I cant wait for more and smack you with a novel next time

Hayden is such an angry kitty. xD

Wow. I really don't like how every time Jude or Mark talks to Hayden, they change their thought patterns and go from being open and happy to something else. You're really good at leaving people guessing too. I'm really surprised at Hayden's past and also that you've linked Mark from Inferno into this (which reminds me I should tell you to update sometime soon? - Please?). I like how you're linking them, it's like you learn new information about them without them knowing... Yeah, that sounded weird to me too...

Um. Anyway, I just wanted to say that you're amazing and that I'm really enjoying this. And I hope that your next update isn't a year away :/

Annie

I really enjoyed this story so far. Hayden is an interesting character and I love seeing the world through his point of view.

Can't wait for more.

OMG

I KNEW IT

there's like 3 people in love with hayden or something? I'm getting that vibe from mark, jude and lewis. Whut .-.

Awwwwww i feel so bad and i don't even know why yet :'(

hullo

I'm crimrose! reviewing again. I hope you don't mind?

I finally read the continuation of the story. I'm so glad you're updating , all I noticed was the flow of the story and the development. I didn't care about anything else as long as I knew what was going to happen. I didn't notice grammar or spelling mistakes,so long as I knew what was going on with Hayden. I love how you formed his character and the setting. About Jude's story and everyone's attitude. At this point, I don't care much about who Hayden ends up with as long as he finally becomes happy.

uhm... I know I'm getting repetitive but... update?

Good story :)

Just in case if u update ever again,i will put u on alert

This story is absoloutely amazing. At first glance, I thought it would be a boring ramblings of some pretend cynical guy. But I was suprised, yet ecstatic to find that it was not. I stayed up 'till one reading this story, and I have NO regrets! Haha :). I would read it again in a heartbeat, and I just fell in love with story, especially Hayden and Jude :). And this is the first time, were I have NO idea who the main character is going to choose! Eeep, just please update soon :).

So I really like this and I hope you update soon. I want to see how everyone reacts to Hayden coming out

PLEASE update! Its such a good story and i cant wait to read more of it