Reviews for The Cynical Ranting of Hayden Paretski
Starlette420 chapter 13 . 1/30/2012
Okay, so I'm a new(ish) reader. I had read up to chapter 12, and decided I wasn't going to review unless you posted another chapter. Simply because I'm tired of people quiting on my favorite stories. But you DID post another chapter and it was quite possibly my favorite chapter of the whole story! XD

I love this story, it's not horribly cliche(sp?) like most of the stories on here. I just love Hayden, and I want him to find love. I'd rather him find it with Jude, but I can settle for Mark or Lewis. I'm a little dissapointed in Mark for taking advantage of Hayden's drunkness though. And also a little upset that Hayden desided to confide in MARK of all people. But oh well, maybe they can be best friends or something. Because I want Hayden and Jude together. XD but whatever is fine. just add soon yeah? This is one of my current favorites. I didn't expect to love it so much but I do! And this review is super long, I wouldn't count on too many long reviews from me, usually it's a 2 liner. but I just love this and I'm hoping my long review will inspire you to write quicker. haha.
CharlieTehUnicron chapter 13 . 1/30/2012
Oh, wow. Bloody amazing. Love. LOVE, I tell you. LOVE.
Madame Penguin chapter 13 . 1/29/2012
I...I really don't know how to respond to the chapter. I thought it was going to be an innocent drama drunk chapter but then you pull out the angst background story that knows how to pull at the heartstrings. Really I don't know how to respond other than I didn't dislike this at all, and I'm eager for the next update...I'm guessing Hayden is ending up with Mark it seems.
January Skies chapter 13 . 1/27/2012
I'm glad to see this story updated. :) Good chapter, its nice to hear about Hayden's shady past.
lovesyoumore chapter 13 . 1/27/2012
loved it! upload soon!
In love chapter 13 . 1/26/2012
I normally don't make reviews, but I am in absolute love with this story. Keep up the good work :D
Bea14 chapter 13 . 1/26/2012
YES I was so excited when I saw this new chapter. I love Mark and how him and Jude both want Hayden (I'm leaning towards Mark because he is nice and innocent and maybe that is what Hayden needs?) On the other hand Jude has suffered with his life as well so he can kind of connect with Hayden. But I can't see them together after Jude and Lewis making out more than once. Is Hayden going to confront Lewis since he lied to him about when he was going to show up at the party? That's kinf of fucked up of him especially since he knows Hayden likes him the best and considers him a friend. I'm glad Mark finally got to kiss Hayden! Go him :) I hope it can conitnue haha. Please update soon. I adore you.
J chapter 13 . 1/26/2012
I am soooo happy You've updated. You made my day! No, my month! haha...Thank you. And what a chapter. We got to know more about Hayden's past and it was heartbreaking. Really wanted to give him a hug (don't think he'd appreciate it too much!) And I really like Mark. Wasn't sure about him in the beginning, but he really seems to care about Hayden and seems like a stable influence, which Hayden needs right now, I think. And I'm glad they kissed! I was hoping for Hayden/Jude pairing but Jude has a lot of making up to do to deserve Hayden's trust. Anyways, I could go on forever, but thank you again for the update...Please update soon. I check every single day (multiple times!)-I know I need a life.
tart chapter 13 . 1/25/2012
Totally lovin' this story right now, it's been awhile since I managed to find something so enjoyable here at FP xP By the way, I can't seem to find a clear description anywhere, but do you mind giving a brief description what Hayden looks like please ;d

Also, WHATTHEHELL Judeee! What are you doing at this time! O
thecowonthebox chapter 13 . 1/25/2012
Finally we can take a glance into Hayden's past.

This man, the leader of the gang, is he going to come back ?

Poor Hayden ! I really hope not ! '

Lewis and Jude are going to be seriously pissed...

He confessed to Mark but not them !
wonderland212 chapter 13 . 1/25/2012
Wow, I always knew that Hayden had a pretty messed up passed but I didn't know that he had the guilt of another person's life weighing on him...that's rough. I think I respect him even more than I already did before, to get off drugs and re-invent yourself takes a lot of strength.

I love that he wasn't afraid to admitt that he is bisexual...too many ppl in the gay community like to dismiss it like it's a choice or like it isn't real, or like a teeneager can't really know if their bi until like their 30's or something...which just seems a bit hypocritical. Yea, some gay ppl do claim bi to help with the transition but I also know ppl who thought they were gay but later found out that it was just a phase. More people, especially in the gay community, need to respect bisexuality...bisexuals shouldn't have to pretend to be one or the other for the sake of society...so kudos to hayden.

I can't wait for the next chapter...I really want to see how everyone is going to act, now that Hayden's out of the closest...and I really hope he starts treating Angelica a little better, she's so sweet.
prostock69 chapter 13 . 1/25/2012
Ch. 13: I can understand Lewis being upset about Hayden not telling him he's bi. I think the reason being is because his past male sexual experience was with Jasper and it haunts him so much, he would rather forget it.

Jude has not right to be upset. He needs to back off Hayden. He's been nothing but a pest to Hayden since he started school there. Then he has the nerve to go behind Hayden's back and try to get with Lewis AND they flaunt it in Hayden's face.

My only complaint is that it wasn't addressed that Lewis lied to Hayden about how he was going to the party later, when he was there earlier with Jude. He has nerve telling Hayden "we are supposed to be best friends" in response to not being told Hayden is bi, but then he sneaks to the party with Jude behind his back. Not cool.
i-wish-i-had-wings chapter 13 . 1/25/2012
hmm, so he came out as bisexual, i wonder what's going through the other guys heads xD i don't like that lewis lied like that, couldn't he just be open with how he feels about jude? and why chose a guy over a friend? lewis is sooo not my favorite person right now!

mark definitely scored some points in this chapter!right now i kinda wish hayden ends up with him, though jude is still sex on legs p

the only two (ok three with amy) i like right now is hayden and mark, the other two...hmmph! i'm glad hayden opened up to mark, though he will probably regret it when he's sober...poor mark will probably fall for him even more after that, the bad boy who needs to be saved p

even though i like reading slash way more, i kinda want hayden to end up with a girl, just like a big f**k you to the guys xp
Hot Tiles chapter 13 . 1/25/2012
Yay- an update! I was hooked on this story from the first chapter and i totally freaked out when i run out of chapters to read. Glad you updated :) i'm home ill in bed but this totally cheered me up. Awesome timing dude :) Looking forward to the next update..
Blublublub chapter 13 . 1/24/2012
Awww, an amazing chapter as usual. It's great to see Hayden actually letting out some of his past. :] And yeah, the make out scene was hot. 3 But y'know I like Jude better. XP Will Jude start hitting on Hayden again since he now knows that he isn't fully straight? GAHH can't wait to see!
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