Reviews for lust & love
viennacantabile chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
this is absolutely amazing. "you're my favorite flavor," the definitions, like vs. lust vs. love. it's just perfect. an instant favorite.
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
I loved the descriptions you used in the second stanza. And I like the lines, "& show you what I feel without using

clumsy words." -Nicely put. This was enjoyable to read :)
young and the reckless chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
i love it,

even though it involves sex, i find it really pure

- and almost innocent. almost.

beautiful :)
kyox88 chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
the last stanza was awesome!hehehe...well writtenjust the second stanza abit hanging! keep up the good work!
wo bu ai ni le chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
I liked the way you played with the three words like, lust and love )

Conventionally (or in my head anyway) love seems to come before lust, but with those definitions in mind it makes more sense to have lust first ) And the way you wrote it made it seems very natural and not morbid at all, as people would usually refer to lusty poems as XD

This poem has a perfect blend of physical descriptions and psychological trails, constantly switiching between love and lust, and finally taking the step forward.

I really enjoyed some expressions, like "french vanilla ice cream skin" "hardly concealed hope" "without using clumsy words". They make the images so vivid and relate-able

So to sum up, great poem!

fleur