Reviews for Do you ever?
ryawhoistoolazytosignin chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
i really liked the last half of the poem. it flowed better. i think i have issues with rthyme and thyme...heeheeheehee. anyway i loved these lines:

"To whom do you sell your heartache,

your whispers in the wind?

When you find its all a lie,

do you give up, and just pretend?"

and these last lines were really awesome:

"When your pain bleeds but to sorrow,

whose scars do you heal?

And when it all becomes too much,

do you ever wish it were real?"

i giveth thee two thumbles up...eth! d-b