|Reviews for Do you ever?|
| ryawhoistoolazytosignin chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
i really liked the last half of the poem. it flowed better. i think i have issues with rthyme and thyme...heeheeheehee. anyway i loved these lines:
"To whom do you sell your heartache,
your whispers in the wind?
When you find its all a lie,
do you give up, and just pretend?"
and these last lines were really awesome:
"When your pain bleeds but to sorrow,
whose scars do you heal?
And when it all becomes too much,
do you ever wish it were real?"
i giveth thee two thumbles up...eth! d-b