Reviews for Sundae Morning |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story. I really enjoyed the entire thing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good first act. This is the type of thing i would enjoy seeing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutly wonderful, you captured the emotions of Sundae and her struggle against her 'friends' perfectly. Just simply amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What the hell? How could you do that? So much potential for such a beautiful story...and you broke it off...with the SADDEST and most STUPID ending EVER! I HATE YOU! I'M CRYING NOW SO THERE. Ahem. Sorry about that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW! That was truly, truly incredible. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Wow. Amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm not even going to front. This is genius. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Deliciously dark. I love love love this. You're very talented at weaving stories. XD Look forward to scene 19. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Completely unexpected in this chapter. Flawless. Good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sheesh, this is just getting creepy. I'm glad it wasn't actually Sundae who killed them...I wonder if her dad has schizophrenia too? Anyway it's getting very gripping, definitely continue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow I really really like this! I would like to see it be a play someday! I think this is really good, kkep writing please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... I really like this! But, just one question to be clear; Does anyone know Sundae has Schitzophrenia? It doesnt seem like it to me, because the way they react to certain things she does.. But you can really tell she has schitzophrenia Like I said, this is really good! Keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *gasp* Wow...At least SHE didnt kill them. Her dad is just evil! update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting story. Please add more chapters! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is not only one of the most interesting plays, but one of the most interesting stories that I've read on FictionPress. It's dark, a little bit twisted, and at times slightly upsetting, but I hunk you've created an interesting antihero out of Sundae. That just raised the question in my mind: what would happen if Holden Caulfield had schizophrenia? Whenever I say "antihero," I think of him. I can't wait for the next scene. Liv |